Date: 2011-10-29 10:43 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] game-byrd.livejournal.com
I literally squeaked out loud when I got to the end of this!

Beautiful! And I loved the characterization of all three of them, and the dynamics of their interaction. I liked the appearing/disappearing Noah-gun. That is so true. He has hammer-space. I also liked that Noah trusts Sylar to back him up, or at least enough to ask him to back him up ... and that Sylar was willing. As well as that lovely 'can I jump out the window in time' thought! Ha!

The back and forth on the key was very good and said a lot about where they are with each other. These guys are really into each other deep (though how could they not be after the Wall?) Thanks so much for writing. I eagerly await more (if there is to be more).
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